tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post113867021041760320..comments2024-02-20T17:40:21.618-05:00Comments on jeremy freese's weblog: (ssf) they met at the libraryjeremyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12755662766163119607noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138812045890746782006-02-01T11:40:00.000-05:002006-02-01T11:40:00.000-05:00Thanks for my birthday present! It's very approrp...Thanks for my birthday present! It's very approrpiate too... nothing screams Kathryn quite like library nudity. You rock!<BR/>--KathrynAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138804450467020972006-02-01T09:34:00.000-05:002006-02-01T09:34:00.000-05:00are you going to tell us how the class responds to...are you going to tell us how the class responds to your stories? i'm curious to see if they "get" you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138775490684363832006-02-01T01:31:00.000-05:002006-02-01T01:31:00.000-05:00JECG: this reminds me of two things. (1) On "Who...JECG: this reminds me of two things. (1) On "Whose Line Is It Anyway?" (a TV improv show), one of their exercises occasionally is to improv a sketch where each sentence has to begin with the next letter of the alphabet. Since both of your stories are in dialogue, it really reminds me of that. (2) In my Grammar class in college (it was an awesome class, really), one of our exercises was to write a story consisting only of subject-verb-object sentences. Harder than it sounds. If I can find it, I'll send it to you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138728325414377642006-01-31T12:25:00.000-05:002006-01-31T12:25:00.000-05:00You ARE sensitive! Not deep, deep. Keep postin...You ARE sensitive! Not deep, deep. <BR/>Keep posting those stories. Your blog (and commenters) sure are evolving since you hit Cambridge.<BR/>Hey, this is a lively blog, man.<BR/><BR/>JoshAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138719849236537832006-01-31T10:04:00.000-05:002006-01-31T10:04:00.000-05:00Narwhals = hot. plus, they probably do have a par...Narwhals = hot. plus, they probably do have a particular mating sequence.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138718479269645012006-01-31T09:41:00.000-05:002006-01-31T09:41:00.000-05:00I'm not sure if I'll be challenged to dig deep or,...I'm not sure if I'll be challenged to dig deep or, if so, if I'll rise (dig?) to that challenge. This is just Adult Education after all, which is also why I'm not worried about the 26 sentences.<BR/><BR/>Anon: Any ideas for what I can do to help the problem where you needed to restart?<BR/><BR/>Also: My other idea for the N line was "Narwhals go through a specific sequence every time they mate." Any opinions?jeremyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12755662766163119607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138717668811063812006-01-31T09:27:00.000-05:002006-01-31T09:27:00.000-05:00Entertaining.The alphabet device is more apparent ...Entertaining.<BR/>The alphabet device is more apparent in this one. Sort of a sing-song rhythm works its way in as you go along. Maybe you're enjoying the gimmick more than the characters now?<BR/>Looking forward to your teacher challenging you to dig deep! <BR/>Thanks for sharing. Fun.<BR/><BR/>JoshAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138716819720713052006-01-31T09:13:00.000-05:002006-01-31T09:13:00.000-05:00hey, your stories aren't 26 sentences long. are y...hey, your stories aren't 26 sentences long. are you going to get in trouble?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138715772087404702006-01-31T08:56:00.000-05:002006-01-31T08:56:00.000-05:00I get confused because I get jarred and thrown out...I get confused because I get jarred and thrown out of the flow. Then I have to get back in and I don't know who is talking, so I have to back up a bit and restart. I get that it is back and forth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138713201733844342006-01-31T08:13:00.000-05:002006-01-31T08:13:00.000-05:00Prude/Mom: Really? But they just alternate. An a...Prude/Mom: Really? But they just alternate. An advantage of HTML instead of written text for this is that I could use colors to distinguish speakers.<BR/><BR/>RWS: Thanks!jeremyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12755662766163119607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5558726.post-1138711700908451342006-01-31T07:48:00.000-05:002006-01-31T07:48:00.000-05:00I liked the other story better, but maybe i'm just...I liked the other story better, but maybe i'm just a) prudish, or b) your mom.<BR/><BR/>Actually, what happens for me is that when you break with the sequence at the end, I get confused about who is talking. But I've never been very smart.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com